This is an amazing poem, one of the best ive ever read, my fav bit was:

Words I've spoken
gone unheard
Tears I cry
Go unseen

that was so meaningful, i also loved the imagery and metaphors u used in this, it was outstanding, well done

Wow i loved this! it was perfection...i loved the first stanza, this was probably the best one i've read all day definitely 5/5 keep it up!!
x!x

Your first stanza was really powerful and intense...so was the rest of the poem, but the first lines stand out the most in my mind. different rhyme scheme than I normally see too, but you used it to suit your purpose, so that's ok :).

good job
keep it up

Tripp

p.s. tell tara I said what's up :-P

I loved the flow you have great words to it was amazing you showed great imagery and it just seemed to flow right off my tounge as i read it it was absolutly positivly amazing
love kaila it was great
p.s. i take critisism i agree with you it is not one of my better poems but i assure you i have way better ones

-Thanks for the heads up, I'll edit my poem a little bit.

I really liked it. I think you used imagery well in this and I liked that you incorporated symbolism mainly into the rain as to create an effect of emotions that could be tied with it. All though I found the rhyming a bit off track in a couple stanzas, I still enjoyed the rythm and movement of it. My favorite lines were,
"You flee from thee
Could you please
Believe in me?"

Not sure why but those lines seemed to have a ring to them at the end of the stanza.

One more thing, "that" in line 4 should be "thats" I think?

Good read

This poem is amazing.
Your a great writer.
You did great on this poem.
5/5
Take care.

Interesting flow, I liked it. It had some great imagery and visualizations, you're descriptions were great. Very well done, I enjoyed reading it.

Awwwww. wonderfull piece of work. true feelings. the flow and belonging of words was gr8.. i loved you poem 5/5

Ooh, I liked this. The flow was good and I liked the short lines. They really added effect. I also like how you put human emotions into a nature poem. I do this too, i think it's very effective. The descriptiosn were good as was the flow. Nicely done 5/5

This was ok. I liked the third stanza, it was rhythmic. This poem could pass as a song, simply because of that stanza being so "catchy."
On the first line it should be "breathe."
The third line should either be "I try" or "trying" for it to make sense. On the fourth line it should be "that's."
In the second stanza "you flee from thee" doesn't make sense. "Thee" means you...so you flee from you is an odd line...
The last couple of stanzas were also good. I can't find any mistakes there.
Thanks for sharing.

Sorry these comments are so late! :\

I really enjoyed this poem, the rhythm was on target, and the emotion was clearly there although I think you could have used maybe some descript words and the title doesn't really capture (to me) the essence of the poem. Still, excellent job! 5/5

~jas~

Well, this for sure is very well expressed
I love the line:
Hormonal hurricane
Something about it that i cant explain... amazingly worded!

This poem has true meaning and I like that. The rythm was quite good and the words flowed. Quite frankly, that's hard to do. Great job! Some spots were a little touchy, and people have recognized that in previous comments, so I'll stop wasting your time. The use of the hurricane and tornado were an added touch. Keep it up :D
Hatori

Very nice, 5/5

This is a beautiful, beautiful piece. You have a small typo on your 4th line down, but besides that it's basically flawless! :) You did an excellent job skittles! Keep it up! 5/5 for sure.
~Midnight Sun