My bestest friend

I'm sorry, but I don't like it.
I'll offer some suggestions:
Never leave a persons name in the poem, that leaves really bad impression.
You shouldn't say that your poem sucks, I mean, you can, but not in the poem, that totally threw me off.
You should work on your rhymes, they're too typical.
Try to go deeper in what you're feeling, to describe emotions a little better.
I won't rate.
Keep writing, I'm sure that you can improve yourself.

Cute, sweet and straight to the point. Great poem, clearly awesome friendship. Keep writing well done :)

Very nice poem katie and it does not suck ok dont ssay that
its awesome keep up the good work!!!

Hey, i think that this was a nice and simple poe,...but do me a favor, never call one of your poems not good bc then it limits your posibilities as a future writer. i know that it sound silly, but it does... keep it up though

Erika

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Aww that was such a sweet poem! kevin must be very lucky :) great katie!! :D