I loved this.
I thought the imagery was beautiful and the flow was perfect.
My favourite part was
''Outside a yellow shining moon,
Had punched a hole in the midnight mist,
We prayed the storm would falter soon,
As we kissed and reminisced.''

I thought that was breathtaking.
Excellent work, as always.

I like this it has a great flow to it and its sweet. great poem 5/5

How. . . Like some one else said. . . the imagery is fantastic. . . The rythm i found did falter once or twoce but this is far outdone by the fantastic choice of words. . .

Lovely poem
Laura
x

Beautifully penned. I really do enjoy reading your poems. Well done!

This was a really great read. The flow was strong throughout. Besides the word just being capitalized in the last stanza, this is pretty much perfect. 5/5

marcella

"Outside a yellow shining moon,
Had punched a hole in the midnight mist". Wow that is such an amazing line filled with powerful imagery. This is great work!

Oh my gosh... i am in love with this poem.. definitly the best one i've read all weeek... the flow is perfect... and the word choice is great! you describe everything so real... it almost like you see what you read... truely beautiful write.. :D

I read a comment you made in the forums and I wondered if your words really flowed so easily as you implied, I actually thought they probably wouldn`t , a lot of people think that but are wrong, I was wrong! yours was great,it was beautiful with nice rhyming and flow ,you are a great talent!

So sweet!!!! x

Mmm. this brought a warm feeling. i pictured it the way the words painted it. i felt the warmth. *sigh* nice write.

Wow!... since you left a comment for me i thought i'd check out your poems...good thing that i did! that is definitely a great poem.. you are definitely a great writer and i'll definitely keep reading hehehe!

I absolutely love this stanza:

Outside a yellow shining moon,
Had punched a hole in the midnight mist,
We prayed the storm would falter soon,
As we kissed and reminisced.

It's so full of imagery. Wonderfully written.

The other stanzas are good too, of course, but I love that one.

Nice work! 5/5

This is sooo cute! i love it ! its a lot like some things i have been through! ... amazing, thats all i have to say. 5/5

Great poem, very sweet. Well pinned, excellent flow. good job 5/5 you earned it

As we kissed and reminisced.

I love that line and I'm glad you chose it as your title. It's fun to say lol... once again.. great poem.. but you already know that =]

Awww very nice
I love this your imagery is always so dead on i can never seem to find a thing wrong with it
nice work
I loved it

This was an amazingly sweet poem which you put so much into. I found it to be capturing definitly hearfelt and hopeful. Seemed like a beautiful dedication in some way to say thankyou to someone of which you really do care about. The flow was great never messed up at all throughout the entire piece. The imagery so vivid from the description. I could really picture the moon in my head upon a darkened sky. I loved this poem a spectacular piece of poetry. Well done~mel

This was very honest in what you felt and you found a great way to let your own feelings out and were great at putting words together

laura

Outside a yellow shining moon,
Had punched a hole in the midnight mist,
We prayed the storm would falter soon,
As we kissed and reminisced.
`Beautiful imagery . Absolutely, and portrays a beautiful emotion .

Absolutely captivating . So vivid, and sweetly sweet (: The flow was great, and just kept steady throughout the whole poem . I could just picture the whole scene .

Stunning .
..__MiNDYY

Good poem