I loved this!
As I was reading I thought it was about the on you loved and then when I got near the end I was like 'hmm'.
I absolutely adore that ending, it was such a twist and had enormous impact on the whole poem.
I thought it flowed nicely and I liked the imagery that you used.
Wonderfully done.

Hey this is a pretty sweet poem

You like the "mirror" topic don't you? I've noticed that.
I can see by the starting subject why most went for love. I'd probably have done the same, or gone for something really sick haha...anyway...
Yeah it was good. Nice and simple.
The effect of the last line alters my previous perspective of the poem, almost forcing me to reread with my new knowledge.
Even parts like "even until I die" which would be melodramatic otherwise, are true with this meaning.
Yeah...I'm not allowed to talk about teenage any more, but this wasn't really. Maybe the language was ordinary, but I'm not suggesting you swallow a dictionary like me, otherwise people won't understand your poems either haha!

Aww, that was very unique, a suprise ending! well done bub

much love and many kisses,
bex

Wow another powerful poem, you are an excellent writter and i enjoy reading your poems, keep it up 5/5

Oooh! wonderful ending! great little twist! i wanna read more!!!

Sweetness!!! (thats my word!)

Very creative... your teacher must of loved it

Really different perspective,i liked especially this part

I know your fave color,
But do I know your heart?
Not knowing you will...
Eventually rip us apart.

Keep it up
LAURA

That was a very good poem. The ending just put the whole poem together. I really loved the ending because of you introduced the reader that you talked about you in particular and wondering who you are. Well Done!God Bless 5/5
<3Tayyy

Wonderfully written and expresses a creative meaning.

I absolutely love the third stanza. Easy to relate to.

5/5

Beautiful...

creative....

loved it!...

the love in it is amazin!

I liked this one a lot because I could easily relate to it...which made me love it even more... You did a fab job

This poem definately ended somewhere i never imagined it would, like alot of others i thought you were talking about a partner, i like peoms that has me surprised at the end at this one certainly did that.
Very well written 5/5

You had me fooled too .. for a sec I thought you were talking about love.. then you ended talkning about ur self.. that is really good.. good twist s and turns loved it good job and keep up the work.. you are a talented writer and dont forget that well done 5/5

Wow wow wow amazing woahh that is soo cool ha im at a loss for words cuz it was so amazing

beautiful job

brittany (MD)

Different is always good! :] I loved the twist in the ending. I, too, thought it was about someone you loved. I loved the title. It really captured me. It flowed really well, and had great meaning behind it!

Beautiful, darlin'.

I Love the twist, very clever. When I first started reading this, I thought you were ta;ling about aboyfriend..then the surprise ending. Greatj ob. Hope you got an A, you do from me!

Pretty good write here.
i was thinking that this was a little elementry, untill i read the last stanza. it blew me away. (;

Always dare to be diffrent. This poem is as unique as you are. Excellent show of emtion, deep, and the flow is wonderful. Excellent job once again.