Moonlit Night

by Rachel RTVW   Feb 28, 2007


Onyx night by light of moon,
Thirsty forest drinks monsoon.
Moss and Ivy creep and crawl,
Grass so thick, it forms a wall.

Stars twinkle from far away,
Loving night, wish it could stay.
Perfect night I've spent with you,
Now we'll await the morning dew.

Babbling brook sings nature's song,
Peaceful serentiy, nothing's wrong.
Gentle breeze wisps through the air,
Starlight glistens your swaying hair.

My embrace wraps you tight,
As we enjoy this moonlit night.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nick who Plays Pool

    Woops, mean't to also say 5/5 :P

  • 17 years ago

    by Nick who Plays Pool

    A bit crowded, but nice none the less.

  • 17 years ago

    by your knight in shining armor

    A beautifully worded poem, nice work

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "The stars they twinkle far away,
    Loving night, wish it could stay."

    A beautiful couplet. The whole poem was just so gorgeous.
    Teamed with the fluid like flow, it's a fab piece
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Allison

    This flowed wonderfully dear, it was a pleasant read. I loved the mental picture that came into my mind. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

    Alyson

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