In a world
by Caty Feb 28, 2007
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I live in a world where everyone wears a mask and people hide who they really are and pretend to be someone they are not. where people lie, cheat, and steal, so they can survive in this world. where people live in the past and don't know how to move on. where people have no heart and the people that do are stomped out. I live in a world where people hide their feelings so they wouldn't get hurt. |
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18 years ago
I can find some rhyme and possibly flow to it, but its hard because of the way its set up. you wrote it like a paragraph and its not the apealing.
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could be much better if you were to sort the lines better..
