5/5 thats actually really good and accurate for what you were writing for. I remember having to go through that stuff in history.. lol
good job

5/5 thats actually really good and accurate for what you were writing for. I remember having to go through that stuff in history.. lol
good job

The thing i enjoyed most out of this poem was the rhyming. the content clues the readers in on what happened, not just emotions alone. that way it made more sense. poems just on emotions about a certain event, doesn't give the reader a full understanding of the situation. You did a good job. I bet you got an A. Tell me how you do.

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Really good poem! 5/5
well done
xxxx

Wow, great poem great meaning, love it, 5/5

Really inteersting topic,you did a good work at expressing and the flow
Keepup the good work
Laura

Really good poem... I always find harder to sit down and actually write about something, than to just write down what comes natural. You did a great job expressing the emotion as well as explaining what happened. 5/5

Great write!

marcella

Wow, it totally fits the subject, and it was really good,
luv gabriella

Nicely done! I bet you got a good grade on this! Lol. Well yeah it was nice and greatly written. Keep up the great work. God bless 5/5

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