All because of you</3

by Brook   Mar 1, 2007


Everything's slowing down now
No more rushing through
Butterflies have stopped fluttering
All because of you

We have to look around now
See what we're really doing
To eachother; the world; our hearts
Do we know where all this is going?

I always hoped it wouldn't end
Unfortunately it seems it has to
Love unbound, we've fallen apart
There is nothing left to do

Everything's slowing down now
No more rushing through
Butterflies have stopped fluttering
All because of you.

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  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Thats sad when love yyou have jsut ends..nothign you could do to keep it going it just stops. if this is true im sry but you are a great writer...kee[ it up.

    melissa

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This...was beautiful!
    The flow worked really well, the first stanza was such a great opener and it just kept getting better and better.
    Awesome work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Dark Demise

    Very nice good, job, short poem but still very great poetic piece,

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    This flowed beautifully... really, I'm pretty impressed. The rhyming scheme was good as well. It's really cute lol. 5/5

    marcella

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