by Spike Mar 1, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
"And if you can tell Ive been lying, don't lose your nerve, it'll only make it worse, because your asking too much. Heres your answer out poured the rain, and now I'm drowning, and your to blame, because your the one that found, that this is lucky and not what you thought. I'm just a shadow on the wall, and hes only a dream found to be a nightmare. i only wanted to be free from this medicine you have me on, because you make me bleed, and now i see your too cold to notice that this is too much." |
I really like it but hard to read. |
by Alma
Wow. really liked your poem it was really intriguing something special about it. 5/5 |
This is a very good poem. Its easy to understand and just really good. You should write more...that would be nice. |