DONT GIVE UP, BECAUSE THERE IS ALWAYS THAT POSSIBLITY THAT THEY'LL CHANGE THERE MIND AND SEE U FOR THE PERSON THAT U ARE:-) GOOD LUCK WITH THAT...CAUSE HE HAD TO LIKE U SOMEWHAT TO EVEN WRITE U THAT 2 PAGE LETTER LOL. GREAT POEM!!!!

XOXOX TIFF

Again good, but it was still generic, and it felt like you were almost just talking, not writing and inspiring... poetry is letting your words flow in a creative way, not just normal converstaional talking, at least that's what i look for, but it was nice, and for a little advice, you're right, don't give up, it should pay off in the end. good work

This is something i know well...except it is not two pages...but hours of continual writing...hours and hours and hours...more than you can ever imagine...but i feel for you and wish you well

-Jason-

Whoa. this was amazing! your writing is so wonderful. makes me smile. your word use the most!

5/5 always from David

Excellento
so i guess this si what you meant by how you felt?
lol it's really good.
i like that you still love this guy, he seems nice...he just doesnt think of you in that way.
wish you bests of luck if you still like him.

WOW, god i love this poem
that s what i went through once in my life.
you finally took out your feelings to that person yet i can relate this poem to my own poem called (fear of rejection) your this poem is my that fear which i mentioned at that poem.
great job, you are a great love writer.

AMMAZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZING lol
awesome,awesome,awesome that's such a good freakin poem!!
5/5!!!

Hey, i liked ur poem.. it reminds me of how i once liked a guy. he waas worse to me about saying no. it was very harsh.. what was the reason he said no, if u dont mind me askin.. i like this one very much. 5/5.. plz comment my poems plz

Aw. This poem is amazing. It makes me smile. I love how even though the answer was not what she wanted, she was thankful.

5/5.

Hey 5/5 i think u should write a poem about the 2 pages he wrote that would be really good x x x