Black as night

by Sabree   Mar 1, 2007


My mood is
black as night
as dark
as night
feelings as
dark as night
as black
as night
i am all alone
trapped
in the darkness
around me
surrounded by blackness
in the bright of the
day
mood is
black as night
feelings as dark
all alone in this world
my little dark world.

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  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    Good, but some more similes other than night wouldnt hurt. this poems really raw, which can be good but can also be perceived as unpoetic. either way, i think it could use some work but definitely has something, if you know what i mean.

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