I loved this poem...especially the last stanza...i could relate to that part alot...it was good..

This poem is beautiful. i love it, i can relate to it a lot. the flow is good.. the wording it better

This poem was wonderful it had great flow and was very well written

Wow...why do I keep repeating this word when I re-read your poems. This poem is amazing. This line, "Anyone to come into my world," In just completely inspired a poem into me. Anywayz, we should talk sometime. Check out some of my poems, will you? I'd like to get some feedback to the person who wrote this poem.
Peace.

Wow okay your poems amazes me but this one stands out all lot. This poem meant a lot to me since I know how this feels. Check out some of my poems please. Good work

xx.chelsea.xx

This...was beautiful.
The emotion behind the words are clear to see and the first line was such a great opener, while the last line was such a beautiful ending.

Not much to comment on that would not be a repeat of what is above =]

keep up the good work,
maybe try adding some more imagery see where it takes you =]

This was very well written. I don't know what to add to what's already been said. I agree! xxx

This is sad!!! I'm here for you lol!!! This is a great write!

There is always jesus!:D

Again, a great base for your poem, powerful, deep emotions, but I want you to make me feel them with your words. I want to feel the lonely confusing you are describing, the deparate longing for someone to care for you and be there for you in your life. You have just tapped the surface of these emotions and I would love to see this poem go further. Again, not trying to insult your work, on the contrary I think, as I said before, it is a brilliant start.

-Tainted Miko

Good job:)

This is such a beautiful poem..i know exactly how you feel....being alone is painful and depressing....but neve let it get you to far down...you might never get back up///Nice job

keep writing

~your fellow poet of depression~
~shannon~

Awww. wow i really liked this..
i feel so alone myself right now. hatin the place im at.. wishin that i could leave from here.. 5/5