Great poem, had great rhimeing, great story all together, Very nice I loved it, lookin forward to more poems, 5/5!, Excelent job,

There didn't seem to be much of a rhyme scheme in some places as it did in others. Not that it really matters, just thought I'd say lol. In the second line of the first stanza, blowing through my face.. doesn't make much sense, for hair, of course it does but not your face. Besides that, it still had a wonderful flow and you wrote your thoughts out beautifully. Nice read! 5/5

marcella

Wow, this was beautifully written. You have a lot of talent, keep up the excellent work. The flow as well as the strucutre was great. I loved your choice of wording as well.

Peace, Joe

Omg. You wanna make me visit Georgia so bad right now and thats where my bf is!! Great a poem 5/5

It is so nice to read another great poem by the great poet of P&Q, very greatly written, 5/5 from me.

Wow. This was so beautiful. I lived in Georgia for like 6 months, & it deffinitley is beautiful. The way you described it, made me want to go back. It was so strong & captivating. I especially loved the beginning stanza & the ending. It started, & summed up the poem so perfect.

But I do agree with them on these lines:

Mudding with my father; laughing with joy.
Having mud hug my toes and around my face

^ It does kind of throw me off, having mud in there twice. But I really like the line ''Having mud hug my toes.'' --That's beautiful.

The imagery in here was amazing. I felt a warming sensation all around me.

I also love the use of similes, & personification. It really made the poem stand out to me.

Amazing job, Hun. Keep it up. 5/5

Bri x

Beautiful poem :) Sweet memories from chilhood. Nothing can replace them.

The night was an enchanted sight to see.
It was a black sky with white beauty stars.
The stars twinkled and danced in your eye.
And you could see a billion jewels afar.

Take Care Cindy

It's a beautiful topic. You reminded me that I need to start writing nature poems again lol. You may want to edit your poems. Some words are one word instead of two like "everywhere"

Absolutely wonderful!! Memories of childhood and under the Georgia sky nonetheless. I too live in Georgia and love it here. A beautiful write. Great Job.
Dixie

Again! You are wonderful with descriptions! Each poem of yours that I read is just wonderful, really! This one has to be one of my favorites. 5/5

That was beautiful. It really made me imagine the beauty of Georgia, and what I envision the entire South to be like. Thank you for increasing my romanticized view of the South =P