Not bad, Just didin't have much flow, I still think it's a good write though, very deep,

Wow this is really good. it flowed nicely. i can relate to the words that you wrote! it's so deep and filled with emotion. keep on writing! i hope to see more from you soon! 5/5

~Kristina

Very good poem i really liked it ur a great wrtier keep it up 5/5

This is an awesome poem and I think that a lot of people can relate to it. I hope there are many more poems to come. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Alyson

Wow this is really really really sad. the ending is very powerful though.. Interesting job. (and if this is who I think it is.. congrats I never knew that you wrote anything)