Good old fashioned sallute your service group. i like it

your servant:
david

Hey this is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and thanks for the comment.

I quite liked this!!! very unique

much love and many kisses,
bex

This is a good poem, something seems missing. not sure what but in no way is this a bad poem. try to get some imagery words in there to tell just how heartless or ruthless the marines are trained to be. just a suggestion

This was a very unique kindoff poem! but i loved it... u really got your ways with words... keep it up!

Exactly! It seems the marine corp. is something personal to you. Perhaps you might encompass all of the armed forces. They are all the digits that work together to make grabbing our dreams possible.

Beautifully written nice job
Take care
xoHSxo