Her Notebook.

by Kaitlin   Mar 3, 2007


She carries her
Notebook everywhere.
A notebook that has
everything about her,
The real her.
Its shows her feelings,
Actions, and mistakes.
She uses it to complain,
Since she can't
Tell anyone how she
Really feels.
She needs to put her
Self back together, and fix
The spots that are broken.
Because all she wants is to
Be fully alive.
Not fully broken.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Ok first off the word her gets a little bit to repetitive... I think this poem needs better words the idea was great but you'' get better

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Aww this is really sad, but i really like it a lot. and i can kind of relate to this in a way. amazing job you did on it! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by Hatori

    This is a good poem, but I think that the flow is a bit off. Keep trying though :D

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    With this poem you need to add some lines together, don't split them, cause its harder to read.

    but still i gave you a 5! David

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