Fantasia

by RavishingEruption   Mar 3, 2007


My life blows up with sparkles
like magic from the dark
i listen to the night song
of the morning lark

The closing of my hour
the sealing of my fate
They now are both
cast out as the final bate

The fairies whisper secrets
denying my sweet dreams
The demons seem to condone
My shattered silent screams

The ghouls and ghosts do moan
and feed their living souls
All the floating spirits shriek and scream
as they throw their empty bowls

*Hey i know the last line is kinda lame but i couldn't think of anything else that rhymed with souls! lol *

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  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    This was actually very dark, the more you read it.
    you can get so many interpretations out of this, which is amazing.
    being able to visualize more than one thing with a poem is hard to do.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    This is a great poem wonderfully done i like the darkness of it:) good job

    keenan

  • 16 years ago

    by S0u10fS0rr0w

    Are you sure your 14, this is a wonderful piece, love the flow and choice in wording, i give it a 5/5!!!

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