My Pretty Lady

by LostLikeTearsInRain   Mar 3, 2007


I'd fly through the sun
Just for some fun
I'd take a stroll through hell
I figure I might as well

I'd jump off a cliff to see if I fly
Does it really matter if I live or I die?
I'd swim to the bottom of the ocean & not reach the top
But at least if I drowned all the pain would stop

Or what if I plunge myself into a volcano
Do you think she would stop me and say "No!"
I doubt that she would
She'd more than likely say "GOOD!"

I've lost my will to live
I don't have anything left to give
My heart has been torn to shreds
And it will take more than just needles and threads

I want to go skydiving without a parachute
Just to see if she even gives a hoot
And when I hit the ground going eighty
Maybe I'll forget you my pretty lady

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  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow! This is wow! Your descriptions, and choice of words were amazing! I love how the ending sums it up so perfectly! Wow!! Wonderful job!

  • 17 years ago

    by AMoreMIo

    Very good poem...you have a lot of creative imegery...there is only one key to joy...i hope that all goes well with her...

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Very well written and this here poem brought tears to my eyes, i have been where you are and i still battle with loving him or not. suicide is not the awnser but the pain is hard to handle, great write, very heart felt and the imagery is good ,the emotion is raw, great job