Wow. i really dont know what to say about this poem. it was beautifully written. emotions run deep in this write. i loved this stanza:
I just want to know the feeling,
Of beautiful love making,
Instead i only hurt more,
As i feel my heart breaking.

nice write. take care <3 kitty

Great Poem, I give ya a 5/5 keep writing and I will keep reading!
*Bleeding Heart*

This sis so sad I hope it didnt happen to you it was a gread write though!!

Wow.. that was intense.. I sorry if this is true.. The flow was excellent. The rhymes were also very good. I think you did an amazing job exspressing the emotion of a rape victim. Once again I really hope this didn't happen to you, but if it is i'm really very sorry!

Keep writing!
Cayce

Wow. That was so sad. It brought tears to my eyes. The flow was really good, too. This was so deep & powerful. Very intense.

I loved the last stanza. Perfectly wrapped this up.

Bri x

Raw.
My mate was raped and I don't know how people get through.
This had great rhythm, great rhyme and a very sad story.

Unless you dont want me to know, is this based on actual events?

5.5
-Em

A very emotional poem, well written and great, keep it up and you'll go far,
nessa

It was sad but awesome, i loved it. maybe you could comment on some of my poems if you have some time well bye 5 from me

Wow.... that was soo good i was crying reading it u wrote it soo good !

Wow...that was ssoo sad. Happens to a lot of girls, some dont even talk about it, which they should. Very touching. Keep writing! 5/5

Oh wow i hope this didn't really happen to you or anyone you personally know. It is a really good poem. I hope you don't really think of yourself that way. Just lead yourself into the right path and your past will be behind you =)

Wow! I'm lost for words!