Oh gee. this was so sweet. and sad at the same time. this is so natural as in your writing. well done!

5/5 David

It was sweet and sad and very well written you got talent man you have talent keep at it great job

AWESOME! it is great and sad at the same time what to go! 5/5

Wow!!!!!

Aww. that come right from the heart. it was so sad :( well done
Much love and many kisses,
Bex

Nice work!! although sad it is more dreamy in the sense that your missing that one person that knew how to make you happy, i know exactly how that feels =( i love poems with deep meaning! what i really liked about this one was that you could read it quickly or slow and still understand it completely! thats definatly a good write! keep up the excellent work! =D 5/5

Awww thats so sad hun!!! i hope this isn't true, the feeling of loss is a horrible thing! i hope your ok!

xoxo Lucy

This was sad and sweet. i could feel the emotions in this poem. nice job hun.

5/5.

Great JoB!!
omg this one was soo wonderfully written. I love your poetry, it's always so flawless and very nice reading. Love it.
Keep on writing - forever. :)
5/5
Take care
xoxox

That was a wonderful poem...the message in it was amazing and the emotion put into it was flawless..5/5!!