Along the Milky Way

by [[F3RG!3]]   Mar 5, 2007


Take my hand were gliding now,
Along the Milky Way
In your eyes I see the love
The words your lips cant say
Hold me close on Mercury
Slide off our shooting star
Look behind as stardust falls
I see the world from a far.
Kiss my lips on Venus
Look up at the stars
Lie on our backs in my Backyard,
Take off and soar to Mars
We reach the rings of Jupiter,
You scoop me in your arms
The way you love me on Saturn
Sets off my hearts alarms
I never thought it possible,
To love someone again
But on Uranus, in your presence
I find myself Lost, my face starts to grin
You told me you loved me on Neptune
And I fell head over heels
Took a nap on Pluto
Soaking in the way my body feels
Take me home Im smiling,
Our love makes me want to burst
The connections we share in our hearts
It fills up the Universe

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenie

    This is really good!
    5/5
    jenie<333

  • 17 years ago

    by OHgreenman

    Very moving piece. I love the last two lines "The connections we share in our hearts
    It fill up the universe"

    Very well done!! Looking forward to reading more of your work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kellie

    This is great! i love the way you use space in it, it is so original!
    thanks for you comment on my poem it was greatly appreciated
    kellie