This is a very good and beautiful poem, like all your poem this is a 5/5!!!! its been like forever, i miss all of you guys at the club, please keep writing!!!

Woah, way brilliant and really beautiful - it was so good it was intense - two thumbs up 5/5... keep up the great poems :)

Really love this....so beautiful...great imagery and word choices. All the best, Debbie 5/5

Great description words and it all flowed well. xo

Hey girl,
still on my favorites, I love this poem and it flows pretty well, 5/5 and keep writing :D

xo
Emia Rose Nicole
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Very well written!

This is my favorite stanza

I caught a glimpse of fear in you, tilted my head to cry;
"Entwine your fingers in mine, that's where they belong."
My naive heart trembled to the sound of your words -
Our bodies were silhouetted against the sailor's sky.

I'm not sure if you mean to but almost every ending word was "sky" or "eye".

I love this..

"Our bodies were silhouetted against the sailor's sky,
"You are mine and I am yours, forever" -
You whispered softly and turned to look me in the eye."

^Beautifully written.

OOOOOooooo...I like this one alot...I love the stlyle also...Villonet?hmmm...The flow was good and the content was beautiful...it painted me a picture...great work
Jonda Beth

Once again, great poem.
You did a good job.
5/5

~Chelsea

This is a beautiful poem. i read the other one ad thought I SHOULD READ ANOTHER. good luck in that contest you entered this one it.

5/5.

Very good poem I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.

PS. Plz rate and coment on my poems and I'll return the favour.

I really liked this poem, especially how you didn't pinpoint any certain problem. It made it extremely easy to relate to, and I love poems that people can relate to. :D

You did a wonderful job with this poem, keep it up.
<3 teria.