Everyone deserves to rest and forget, but few are able to do so

Very descriptive, some great images, and though a dark and sad poem, one that ends with a note of hope for the future-keep that shred of optimsm to light the darkness! Remember, the past is gone, really there is only the now, which allows the future to be whatever we make it. Write on!
Peace, Poetry & Power,
Gary Jurechka

This was really good, When I saw 13 I must admit I expected much less,I was much surprised to find that kind of maturity in your poem, Allowing whats in your subconcience mind to come back to your concience mind so that you can deal with it is a great step forward in healing from anything. very good write. thank you for your comment,that was definately not my best poem,I was just venting a little frustration,thank you though.

Wow... that was really... good. no, that was great.

Great like the last one I read! 5.0

I'm still working on building up the courage to really open that door all the way and let the memories come, but I'm going to get there!

That was beautiful, and flows so smoothly, it was amazing. 5/5
gabriella

The poem could use some added descriptions and tightning up. It's nowhere near a five poem, in fact I doubt a famous poet's even is. It does have maturaity of thought, so let's see where that takes you.

U must have an outstanding imagination or a really terrible past...but ill bet on imagination cause ur still 11....too young to be a cynic...wont u say?
anyways...this one...disregarding ur age...a 5/5...take into consideration ur age...id have put a 6/5....bravo

I enjoyed reading this one very good visual images

brittany (MD)