Comments : A bus stop Conversation

  • 13 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    WOOOOOOOOOOOW is this based on a real convo babes this is an amazing write had me hooked from first stanza to last WOW it just makes me realise the lives that some people have lived...WOW

    Great write titta xoxo

  • 13 years ago

    by Angie

    Sad yet powerful.... amazing Chelz, simply amazing. I love the fact that for one so young you have a caring and loving soul that not many at my age have. I hope those that read this write learn something from it and from you as well. Love ya girl, don't ever change and keep writing your powerful and heartfelt writes.

  • 13 years ago

    by Lu

    Chels, I came to read this prepared with tissue and OMG I sure did need it. What an incredibly touching poem. I don't need to tell you what a wonderful heart you have.....because this poem speaks volumns about just how compassionate you truly are.
    Congrats n being chosen for today "Reader's Choice Award"
    Well deserved A.I.D

  • 13 years ago

    by ReBecca

    This was very touching. We think we have it bad and then somebody opens our eyes. Great Job.

  • 13 years ago

    by swill

    There you go old man, you just met the most golden heart of the century, my CHELSEY! If you think your life was in ruins, don't think so anymore, because you met Chelsey. She is so kind and dear that she'll take care of every stranger that crosses her. Shes a piece of heaven on this complicated planet.

    Shes MY chelsey :D

    I love you chels.....remember that you're beautiful...especially that heart of yours... I love you!!

    And I miss you... pleaseee come online sometime!

    I hope everything is going well for you including that new guy :) Thanks for always being there, you know I always will....

    Your darling friend, Dhaval

  • 13 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    Very beatiful, you really touched my day and life, that is whats going to make you an excellent poet.

  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    Your poem really makes one stop and think. This is so true when you think you are at your lowest there is always someone worse off.

    But when those thoughts went through your head
    You met someone who had it worse than you
    They told you a story to change your mind
    Your day was changed by someone you never knew

    I loved this stanza. Excellent job!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 13 years ago

    by Tammie

    This is an amazing poem Chelsey. The story was really unique, and if this is based off something that happened to you, what a story it really is. The moral behind this story is very realistic, and most people should realise it, including myself most of the time. It's good to see such a meaningful poem, I don't see them that much. Not one with such a moral behind it anyway.

    The flow of the poem was really smooth and the rhyming so natural. You have such a great talent. 5/5


  • 13 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    I was going through the Fun and Humor section, where I came across your link for people having a bad day. This is one of the most, if not THE most amazing poem I have ever read. I was having a really bad day, I mean, I basically felt worthless to my parents and I cut from my softball team, but reading this, well, I was forced back into perspective. There are people who have it so much worse than me, and reading this really helped me. I'm going to print it out and read it when I need some reassurance. Thank You so much for sharing this beautiful piece of work. infinity/5 if I could!


  • 13 years ago

    by Boy

    Real feelings also sad a bit.. amazing wriiten gd work take care