A shadorma is a syllabic poem. It consists of 6 unrhymed lines, syllables going: 3-5-3-3-7-5

Awww wow, thats cute haha shadorma hey, thats a good little poem and ryhming system

xoxo Lucy~

Hm. I like this poem. The structures cool. But I thought it was supposed to be a nonrhyming poem. You sorta rhymed...
But I liked it nonetheless. It even reminded me of my poem- Those Three Words

take care. 5/5--i've never seen that type of poem before.

Short, sweet, simple, i like it. It means alot.

Short but amazingly sweet.
Love it.
-Lauren

You know i think this poem is rated low because people dont fully understand the style i have a poem that is rated 3.3 and it may not be that good but i think it may be because of a different style. Good on you for trying this. It was really nice~mel

Good job on this. it was great! 5/5