What a sweet loving poetry. Only you can play with such simple concepts like 'your name' and create such an outstanding poetry. Loved the concept and the work.

Best Wishes
Michelle

Hey great poem. beautifully worded. great job. xx

Robert
I love reading your poems they bring smiles to my face.

Your Name, so it may whisper, in my mind, bringing me serenity,
So that it may sing to me, like a lullaby, when I lay down to sleep.

Loved these lines.
Take Care Cindy

There's always something about a name. Excellently put!

Robert,

I have not read your poems in a long time, too long! Reading them always puts a smile on my face, this one was an exceptional write.

Should try this poem is real life, I'm sure you will get equally exceptional results.

Regards,

Steven

I love this!! Amazing as always!

"Might I have your name, my dear, for your Soul, I wish, to woo.
Your Heart, I wish, to capture. I want to thrill, every part of you.
But I need to know your name, to properly show you adoration.
I need to know what to call you, when I express my admiration.
I'd like to know all about, your birthday and birth date too,
So when that time comes around again, I can properly adorn you."
I really like this poem.I think so many of us can relates to it, especially myself. Love it, kel.

Sweeeeeet ^_-

just the type of poems I like to read ..

Great job ..

I understand the feeling behind these words, the need to make life more beautiful by loving and wooing a woman to the extent that you do. If only more men would see things this way, life could be so beautiful:)

Well done,

5/5 Ingrid

This is an amazing poem

Great flow! Nicely built!