When first i came

by lina   Mar 8, 2007


When i first came to this life
The first face i saw was yours
Your lips kissed my cheek
Exactly at this moment
I felt your love,tenderness and happiness

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  • 17 years ago

    by lina

    Thanx guys for encouraging me

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Second line should be yours. not your. the love in this is great. this could be a love poem or a friendship poem.

    loved it. 5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Some kinda shorty but it is sweet
    Keep writing hun
    See ya
    Laura

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