After

This kind of gives a mixed message betwwen death and life and this is good to make people think but be careful not to make it too confusing.... this one tempts that line but you did a good job on not crossing...very daring but very good

This is beautiful, it was so sweet, your poems flow so smooth and slow,
gabriella

That was a good poem - I just recently got married and the whole thing of two becoming one (which I used to think was such a cliche) is so true. You feel like you survive with one heartbeat and that you're not your own life anymore (not that you loose your individuality through it - you just gain so much more). Good poem. :)

Aw. i thought this was sweet,
"we are not alive,
but our hearts have become one".
it was short but if didnt need to be long, you said all that needed to be said. well done hun.
Much Love And Many Kisses, Bex.