I can tell that that poem came strait from the heart it great to hear ur feeling betta now keep ur tha great work

Omgaw!!! ur awesome!!! ily!! ur rock and writing poetry!! i just a beginner but i will get better!!!

That is really good poem! Check out my poems...they suck but tell me what u think

This is really good, and i'm glad you're feeling better!!

Thanks for the comments!....this is great and it definitly came straight from your heart!! great job! 5/5 from me

Haha that is really weird...i live in ct what about you....but yeah that is weird....and i used to go out w. a guy named will...haha...comment back... have you ever liekd/gone out w. someone named drew?

Oh yeah btw..no that wasn't true...but one time this guy named J.P went out w. my friend jess... and he cheated on her...so she asked me to write her something so i wrote that for her...but yeah thankfully ive never been cheated on...commetn back!!

Awww thats good that your and his parents met e/o...mine and shanes already did haha..and thats cute that you went shopping together!...does he drive? what grade are you in btw haha..and what does wil look like haha

Haha aww he sounds cute....btw means by the way haha..

shane- kinda long brown hair (like an inch above his shoulder)...greenish gray eyes, they like change color... hes really tan...haha...he has abs too...hes pretty tall, like 2 inches taller than me...and hes 17 too

im 17 and im a junior haha..comment back!!!

He is really good looking haha....but yes i play a lot of sports haha... i play lacrosse, softball, field hockey, and basketball, and ive been dancing since kindergarten...and im in the marching band haha what about you haha

Okay..first off yes i am a christian...now i have like a medium brown hair, and it goes mid length, like a couple of inches below my shoulders and its wavy...i have hazel eyes...im pretty tan haha...umm i have 2 holes in each of my ears and my cartilage pierced... im pretty tall, like 5 foot 7 or something... i love to shop, my fave stores are american eagle and hollister... umm im not skinny or not fat, im a good weight.. uhh i love my car..i drive a silver audi tt roadster...and i have a twin brother and a younger brother whos a freshy haha..thats about it for now haha...comment back!!

Wow 5/5 ur real talented totally feel the poem check out some of mine if ud like. keep it up

Yeah driving is great!...i actually went out w. shane tonight haha...but i had to get back madd early bc i have 2 projects due monday and i havent even started haha..comment back!!

What are you guys doing tmrrw?

Mac and cheese yumm....me and shane went out to dinner like around 6, and then we went and got icecream, we were gonna see a movie (haha) but i remembered i have 2 projects due monday and u havent started...so i had to leave him haha..but were hanging out tmrrw and maybe going sledding haha

Exellent. I really like this one!

Im glad things are going better for you... thank you for the comment... i can relate to this poem in some areas... there are a lot of people who can relate, me being one...... this is a really good poem... you can tell it came straight from your soul

Aww thats cute....yes i did see shane... i just finished my projects, its liek 10...and i went over his house for awhile, and yes we kissed haha... but yeah it was cute...adn then i had to go home to do my dayum projects haha... but yeah...comment back!!!

Wow that was really emotional. I hope things keep getting better. 5/5

I forgot to add that me and shane hung out today too haha...bc i had to drive him home, so we hung out at his house for awhile today too haha...did you and wil hang out ? haha comment back!!