Love the poem
cant wait 2 look at more of ur stuff
xx

Know wat that feels like Gr8 poem the twist at the end reflects the feeling

The ending was the best part....I love that. The way you bulit it up and at the end...throw you for a loop. God job :-). 5/5

I love how you repeat a certain line in most of your poems

great job

A very beautiful write[[= 5/5.

Perfect ,
Keep It Up .

Fr3sh...lol

Amazing. 5/5

Love it!!!!!

I was not kidding...
when I said this poem totally kicks a-s-s lol
I really like it..makes you wonder ya know
Aweosme Job 5/5

OMG
that was brilliant
I had chills
its like the words everyone looks for
keep it up its great writing u have there