Can she escape her fate

by Kersten   Mar 10, 2007


Can she escape her fate
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I no its long but i would really like it if you read the whole thing, and when your done vote or comment even if you thought it was the worse thing you have ever read in your life.
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Looking out the window
the worlds passing her by
the story of her life
the way shes suppose to die

She looks in the mirror
seeing every memory
wondering if she can
escape her fate

Her father beats and abuses her
her mother addicted to drugs
she wants to get out
she wants to be freed

As she sits and wonders,
why do i always feel so sad
when every one else seems so glad

She wipes away her tears at night
knowing whats about to happen,
her father opens the door
slipping in quit as a mouse

She lies there thinking
as her does his job
does every father do this
does every Father hurt there child

She asks god every night
to please take my life away
I'm worthless and not wanted
nobody loves me i have
no reason to stay

After her fathers done
and as hes leaving the room
he turns and whispers
don't your tell a soul

The next night she scared to
fall asleep not knowing if
her fathers gonna want to
do his last and final job

She said to herself
if he does if again I'll take
this knife and just
kill him

As she says this
her father walks in
he tells her one more
then I'll be done

In the middle of
what he calls his job
she says wait daddy i
i have something to say

She pulls out her
knife and says it's time
to escape my fate

She kills him,
then her mother
and runs leaving the bad world
behind her

She lives happy now
with great parents
and friends no worries
no regrets because
life now has better plan.

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thank you for taking the time to read it now please let me no what you thing!!!!! All comments will be returned.
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  • 17 years ago

    by MeganLeigh

    I love this poem. I hope this didn't accually happen. 5/5. Very strong.

  • 17 years ago

    by AmazingOne

    Wow.
    intense.
    but i absolutely loved it!
    amazing.
    Great job!
    Bravo!
    =]

  • I thought it was really good but alot of it did not rhyme but it made a good point and was it true

    i ha the same thing happen to me but i didnt kill them
    um comment my poems apprectiate it so much

    later much luv (valerie)

  • 17 years ago

    by lost soul!

    I really like that it seem like i was in that gurl shoes.

  • Wow, I like your poem u got a lot of emotions in it....i give it a 5/5..... can u tell me what u think of my poems rate and comment them please