by Colby Mar 14, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
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You sit there with a tear running down |
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WOW I am really impressed with this poem you did an excelent job |
by Perfection
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Yo man I liked this poem it's sad an emotional which is what I want a sad poem to be.... |
by Kaila
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I thought this poem was good...it had a lot of nice discriptive words and your imagery was grand I got kinda lost in the middle though but oh well it was a good poem anyways nice job! |
by Tricky Daze
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There is some problem with the length of lines but so sad and sorrowful and as another thing symbols in poem just tried to make this poem bad but they couldn't |
by Treal
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I like alut |