Don't Tell Me What To Do!

by Just Lucy   Mar 14, 2007


You laugh and you joke
And you think it's all a game
Your words are making me choke!
So stop driving me insane

Don't tell me how to wear my hair
It's my image here not yours
What your thoughts are, I don't care!
We all have a few flaws

Don't tell me what to wear tonight
I'm sure I can dress myself
You know your not always right!
Put that skirt back on the shelf!

Don't tell me to go ice-skating!
If only you knew the truth
Every time I go I'm hating
You know he will be there too

Don't tell me to put it in the past
Every time he sees me
He puts me in a cast
Can't you see through to my pain?

Don't tell me not to worry
Because worry is what I do
And I'm sure you would scurry
At the site of the man who hurt you!

Don't tell me to stand up to him
It's a whole lot harder than that
It's like facing the grim
To look at the guy who r a p e d you!

Don't tell me to calm down
I'm serious now STOP
You cannot stop my frown
I'm not going out tonight!!

Don't tell me I have no choice
It's my life at risk not yours!
I can't hear his cold dark voice
But apparently you don't care!!

Stop telling me what to do!
I'm the one in pain
And if you even knew
Than maybe you would care

So don't tell me what to do
I can figure that out myself
I really don't need you
Making me feel so much worse.

(C) Lucy Green

* This poem was written for a contest, please tell me what you think *

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very good
    I can never seem to find anything wrong with your poems
    Ever!!
    Which is very impressive to me
    You by far are going on my favorites list
    Your great

  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    Wow lucy this is a great poem you could have enter it in the Untold stories contest it would have fit right into it. but reading it now is so great cause I can just take the poem and the feelings in a friend of mine is having this kind of issue lately this poem reminded me of her

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This is another greatly written poem by one of the greatest poet here. your poems are so great and they take me to aa different world as i can relate to them. my dear, you are really talented and one of those poet who i really enjoy reading. keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Aw. this was so sad ;[ Made me all teary.
    It flowed nicely & had TONS of emotions in it. I think that some of the rhymes seemed a bit forced , like the one about the 'cast'. but that's just me.

    Other than that, nicely done, dear.

    Bri [x]

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    I love this poem. its really great. the wording, the stanzas! but id have to say that stanza 9 is my favorite stanza though. GREAT