My Death Won't Be In Vain

by KaKaSHi   Mar 14, 2007


An Angel soared down from the Heavens Today and asked me for Directions

She said "Where Can i Find the one whose Eyes are Perfection."

With a heart full of greed she said "Her eyes are all I need, to win the "Perfect Angel" Elections.

I Swear, I never told her where You were,
even after torture and Seduction.

Cause your perfect sweet Black eyes,
are the window to your soul
And I can't let anyone harm you,
or make you feel less whole

Now her patience's wearing thin,
and I know this will be my End
As My last request there's one message I'd like to Send
With my last breath I want you to know
My death wont be in Vain

I die to protect those Eyes that taught me to Appreciate the Rain
For those I'll endure any Pain,
My death won't be in Vain

Protecting those Pearl Black Eyes
That drive me insane
What better way to reach my Demise?
My death won't be in Vain

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow I really liked this poem as well, such a creative story line to this poem. What I liked the most was the dark angel trying to steal the eyes of a young soul. What I really liked was how you showed the angel getting angry while the person in the poem still grasped on and denyed it access to the person who's eyes were black as night. AMAZING! No other word to describe it. You have a gret touch when it comes to dark poems keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow outstanding. Really lovable piece how beautifully the feelings are expressed, I am really impressed. V true words of love. 5/5 u deserve. smile 4 me by checkin out my 'fart is an art'

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I loved the repeation, although some of the rhyming seemed a little forced to me. Excellent word choice dripping with heartfelt emtions. Again you have done a brillant job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Maisie Martin

    There'sn a ton of voice in this poem; nalmost like I can hear you saying it. the rhythm throughout is something unique, and I like it. amazing work. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Tht's a great write!...beautifully penned!...good choice of words!The repetition gave the poem a good effect!..lovely Poem filled with love!...Kp it up!
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