A love that's true (collab)

by Leanne   Mar 14, 2007


Faced pressed against your shoulder
Gripping you tightly in my arms
Together we can make it through
Always, I'll keep you save from harm

Whenever you feel lonely
Just remember what we feel
The passion burning deep inside
Makes you know this love is real

Seeing your tears falling
Turns my heart upside down
Wanting to soothe your fears
Wipe away that frown

Slowly but surely a smile creeps in
Your sparkling eyes shine bright
Body entwined, we don't want to let go
As the day drifts into night

Lying here in your soft arms
Everything becomes so perfect
Hoping you'll always know
Gave you all my trust and respect

Your words spoken like a song
Ringing straight to my heart
To me you are amazing
Felt this way since the start

Never thought I'd find 'The One'
Now know it deep in my heart
We were meant for each other
Our love will never tear apart.

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  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    This is really good! :] It flowed really well & was just so beautiful. The rhymes were good & nothing seemed forced.

    Lying here in your soft arms
    Everything becomes so perfect

    ^ I think 'lying' should be 'laying'. And those were deffinitley my favorite lines.. So beautiful. & peaceful.

    Never thought I'd find 'The One'
    Now know it deep in my heart

    ^ The second line: I don't really like the way it's worded.. Maybe add an ''I'' after Now. Or something.

    JUST MY SUGGESTIONS & OPINIONS :]

    But i really loved this..

    Beautifully penned, hun.

    Bri [x]

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Well, who was the collaberator?!
    They must be damn good is all I can say!
    AHAHAHAHAHA
    We did good on this I think!

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