Flying high

by Kersha Sam   Mar 14, 2007


When the storms of life gather darkly ahead
i think of these wonderful things i once read
I say to myself as threatening clouds hover
Don't hold up you wings and run fro cover

But like the eagle knows that the higher he flies
the more tranquil and brighter becomes the skies
there is nothing that God ever asks us to bear
that we can't soar above on the wings of prayer

and in looking back over the Storm you passed through
you'll find you gained strength and new courage too
for in facing life's storms with an eagles wings
you can fly far above earth's small petty things

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  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    I really enjoyed it. I think it flowed and the rhyming was used quite well. I like the inspiration you provided in the peice with the purpose to help realize thagt when things get hard, it's not the end of the world. Remember the better things.

    I did however think that the beginning stanza wasw a little weak, and these lines "you wings and run fro cover"
    should be "your" and "for" correct? (i know they're just typos I'm just anal about that)

    And I thought the last line wasn't really powerful enough. I think it could have been worded better, it was a bit too long to really make an impact.

    Overall though I really enjoyed it and I think you did a great job