The end of the world

OK to whoever is reading this it is not really a poem its more like a short story i wrote i would be very happy if you read it and tell me wat u think.Thank you.

The End of the World

Dark skies cover the world. Heat burns the flesh of the suffering humans.Fire falls from the dark sky,burning everything that falls in its path.Whispering voices in the wind. Demons tearing at the flesh and breaking the bones of those left behind.

The raining fire stops and turns into falling human remains. Now the sky is darker then ever, and the clouds are pitch black.Flaming birds fly in the dark nothing less sky shrieking so loud it will make you go deaf.

Strikes of lighting light up the sky and hit the remaining trees and buildings.There are even explosions come out from no where sending a chilling ring in the frighten ones ears.

A flood of blood washes out the world, and moments later everything goes into a terrorizing silents for days.

Now everybody is gone.Everything is gone forever and to never return.