Man i wish i could write like this
I mean it sounds like music. it sings
epically the last two parts,. like nothing force. really nice job.
anyway as far as the contents. Wowwwwwww hang in there, hell im
even getting clean. and im tellihg you
this cause i never in a million years
thought there was hope for me. here
i am alive and kicking. and feeling
whats that FEELING? YEA I CAN FEEL
SOMETHING . remember what i say in my poem medicate CAN'T FEEL
CAN'T HEAL. thats it It's that simple
Its friday and i will want to get high
today but i won't and i feel like s**t
all day and tonight but i feel good tomonnorow. man i got to learn how to spell lol cy

Nice flow... very good use of words to express the feeling of helplessness and despiration