Two sets of eyes
by Silent Words Mar 16, 2007
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Two sets of eyes, but yet they still see, the same sights, the same destiny, they both see what is meant to be, they see you and me. They see us struggle, they see our pain, some with reason, some in vain, but no matter what happens, they always see, us together forever in our perfect destiny. |
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16 years ago
by JodiieBaybeh
Awww this poem was so sweet very movin good job! 5/5
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16 years ago
EXCELLENT poem. I love the way you've written it.
Fantastic
Josie -
17 years ago
This is really good nice job!!!
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17 years ago
by x Mo x
Im not really used to that form and pattern, but I still thought it was really good. Ill have to read some more of your poems.
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17 years ago
by Kurt
This could be a really good song. I really enjoyed the lines even though they were a bit different then I'm used to. Great job all in all and I must read some of your other work.
