This was a poem that didn't follow the normal standards and yet still blew most of what I read away. Great job with the flow and rhythm. I think you have an amazing talent and you utilize it in a creative and genuine way.

Awesome poem!! I like the alternating lines... "i know how it feels..." "because..."

I like the pinball affect this has as you read each line. Very cute

{5/5}

[PygmyPuff]

Very catchy poem, one that sticks in your mind. Good job!

That was really beautiful, I loved it.
Great job.

I know how it feels to be without you.
Because I felt that way for a long time

I love these lines, great write!

Good poem i like it

It is a poem with not much depth to it but more basics, it has good potential and relativaty for other great work, keep it up

Good job! i really like its.. i can feel the emotion in it.. keep up the good work!!!

Wow.. this is great... I know how it is when your soulmate sticks in your mind...I have someone like that too... Thank you for all the votes and comments on my poems by the way... very much appreciated!!!

Beautiful poem.. yeah this poem is really great.. =)

I can relate to this in a very special way
Great rhythm

I love this its simple and very easy to remember
love always*

I loved it. It's simplicity brought about a certain edge to it, that struck me as amazing.

Definitely a 5/5

Love this poem ;]
Puts a smile on my face <3
- 5 / 5 -
- Nic x

Well roy I don't know how you have managed to pump out 717 poems but you have and I find most of them pretty good. I liked this one as it was short and simple yet didn't lack any emotion. Nice and with words that most can relate to. peace

Outstandung. Very different yet very real. One of my favs

Im really liking this. i cant even tell why. it just makes me want to go quote you.
its sad but hopeful.. im not making sense but somehow this should be taken as a compliment.
good write roy
=]

I liked it. I felt that it could be made better. The wording was ok.
"Because you have touched before."
might sound better if you said instead
"because I felt it before"
or
"because I felt your hand before"

i gave it a 4/5

I know how it feels to be excited
Because this poem got me excited.Great job.