Nice well written poem nice flow
nothing force 5/5
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Sad story..but good
5/5

I bet there is one girl out there experiencing exactly this.
maybe a victim of 9/11. well it's so realistic. you write very well.
i hope you keep up the great stuff.

Good poem.. sad indeed. i can imagine the picture in the poem perfectly! 5/5

Dang it... u got me crying more.........i need a tissue....really good poem again....i think u should put at more length but its good anywayz..