I've never cried when reading a poem, but i cried while reading this one. i guess it's because i found love and i don't want to watch him die one day and i especially don't want him to see me die...this sorta thing makes me wonder whether or not i should love. anyway i loved this poem 5/5 def.

What a tear jerker...
This kind of problem has been plaguing me recently. I don't know what i would do without Marcus and i hate the thought of losing him to circumstances i can't control.
But excellent poem, you really touch hearts (and tear ducts) with this piece
5/5
*Gem*

Wow. again i loved it. nice use of parallel structure.

ahh, i just want to give you such a big hug. this felt so painful. loosing someone so important would drive me insane...no beyond it...

U can make poems tht can make me cry u know tht? the other one where the girl wouldn't eat almost made me cry..now im in tears...u r one of those pots tht can write really really sad ones cuz its hard to make me cry with a poem...good write!

Wow, truly deep
this is your second poem that easily made me cry.
you are a very talented poet, keep it up

I felt the tears, but as normal they never hit my skin. This was an amazing wirte, and it just made me think of my girlfriend and how much it would kill if that was us. 10/5!

'He was so happy forty years ago when she became his bride.'
^ too long. the rest of the poem is shorter lines, especially the line in that stanza.

amazing job though, i loved the poem
you're a pretty good writer, hun.
keep it up.