The Girl I love

by Colby   Mar 17, 2007


She sits there across the room
her eyes pass me and my heart starts to bloom
and i find it hard not to stare
going up to her i do not dare,

She leaves as i follow
making my heart feel hollow
so I stand beside her smelling the rose
how much i love her only god knows,

I find her coming to a stop
she looks at me as I keep mu jaw up as it wants to drop
she sit back down looking around
as her eyes pass once more, my heart starts to pound,

I hear her speak and my heart starts to melt
the feeling i got from her words i have never felt
she leans back and her face starts to look sad
as i remembered the moments we once had,

If she was thinking the same thing i was
could love be for no reason but because?
as she leaves once more
she turns around and shes the only one i adore.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Colby

    Who is this gurl, yo fo shizzle.....u are a good poet, did u even know it?? ahaha i rhyme all the time!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Emily

    YOU ARE A BRILLIANT POET! I absolutely love this; it is so hard to find a guy who does poetry, keep it up!!

  • 17 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    On these lines:

    "she looks at me as I keep mu jaw up as it wants to drop
    she sit back down looking around"

    I think you wanted the word 'my' instead of 'mu', I think you know that already. And 'sit' should be 'sits'. Other than those I really liked it. This can probably be related to almost everyone lol. Anyways very well written. Keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by The battleground in your heart

    Omg i can only say one thing to this........................................................................it was excellent, u should check out all my poems even though there arent very many, but if u can then thx alot
    ~Stephan~

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    This is a poem tht i can just go aww too good poem.. thxs for join the club ive been waiting for someone to join...thxs and welcome =)

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