Missing You....

by xclusive   Mar 17, 2007


I loved him unconditionally from the bottom of my heart,
But he didn’t care and ripped me apart.
I called him my idol, a soul so strong,
But unfortunately he proved that I was wrong.
I remember, I use to recognize him from his essence,
But now I thrive for his single presence.
I trusted him extensively; he would never let me fall,
But everything changed the day he left us all.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Hidden Feelings within these Words

    Yeah, the poem was great. Stanzas would be a little nicer.. Just to keep it looking neat, and not like a story. Honestly, it is only my opinion, when I see a poem that is not in any sort of stanzas, I always think "I'm going to be here for a while" because it seems longer. Not really trying to critisize you. You're a great writer, keep up the good work. You do have potential. =)
    -Ally

  • 18 years ago

    by vishesh

    Yo thas a very deep poem......keep up the good work and looking forward to see more nice poems from you.