My leaving...

by David   Mar 19, 2007


My leaving...
Started with a day at school
Again I was not trusted
Again I was played the fool
Yet I keep pushing through
Only reason for my love to you

Yet each day brings more pain
A deeper meaning of the word struggle
No one to help me, for me to lean
My emotions have been cut off now
They are hidden by an invisible screen

I stumble and fall
Hit the cold ground hard
Scratches and cuts
Yet I continue through all

I have fought too much
Been through more
My heart now no one can touch

I bade farewell to all whom I will miss
And to the world I blow my last kiss

My leaving...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Oh wow that ending...it brought tears to my eyes.
    It was so beautiful.
    I thought the flow in this was flawless and I enjoyed the wording.
    Yet another wonderful write.

  • 18 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Uniquely put! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Wow David.... so emotional.. I know I say that alot, but your poems are always so emotional.. which is really good!! The flow and wording is spectuaular as usual my friend. Awesome job as always 5/5
    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

  • 18 years ago

    by Static

    Great working aropund of the stanzas loving it!
    sill depressing but i know ull cheer up cos ur too good to leave yaself on the ground :P

  • 18 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Enjoyed reading this....very well done. 6,5,4,3,2,1, like it! All the best, Debbie

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