I like it. It's beautiful. I know what you feel.

Very beautiful, flowy way of telling the story and at the same time express the feelings of missing him and disbelief..... i do really like the way all your poems flow very nicely (i'm sorry i say the word flow to you alot, its a great consistant aspect to all your poems)

Nice we all miss someone I really like this
poem. Diddy's song <missing you>will
always be one of my fav. do you like that song. yea you proably do since we always
like the same stuff. Its hard to believe we
are so far apart in age.

It must be our pain
that makes us the
sane

We must be the game
that drives us insane

sorry i ws on a round
must be the poet
inside of me
p.s. speaking of missing
I MISS YOU
CY