Captivating Eyes

by Angel Of Death   Mar 21, 2007


It was a big mistake,
Never should have took it there,
Who knew his eyes could captivate,
Proceeding a very short-lived stare.

It was an unusual feeling,
Couldn't quite comprehend,
Not sure if he or others noticed a thing,
Quickly turned away, the stare was at and end.

Through a laugh,
He asks "What?"
But an answer she couldn't supply,
What would she say? was it something to deny?

His eyes were purely gorgeous,
Something she had never noticed,
To her, he now seems flawless,
And that memory has become her focus.

**Really sh-t i know but i tried**

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  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    This is really sweet. def not sh-t!

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Very nice. and it is so true. always gettin lost in my bf's eyes...congrats!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    Well I Liked It!

  • 16 years ago

    by Somber Esprit

    Hey, that's a pretty cute poem! i know what you mean... i always get hopelessly lost in my bf.'s eyes... (umm... thought you might like to know... last line of 2nd stanza, i think 'and' is meant to be 'an'...)

  • 16 years ago

    by naina

    U call this shit .....o god.....its so beautful and wow what feelnz u have expressed....kp up the guuuuuuud wrk dear