The ultimate sin

by Leanne   Mar 21, 2007


Tears were falling
Eyes turning black
From behind she heard him calling
Yet she never looked back

Replaying conversations
That were best left unsaid
Discovering illicit relations
Happening in her own bed

Mental images eating away
To block them she desperately tries
Revenge to them, will be served one day
No more tears were to fall from her eyes

Two people once held so close to her heart
Destroyed her slowly within
None were blameless, both playing a part
In commiting the ultimate sin

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Beeeeeautiful.
    Powerful words, perfect imagery, flawless flow.
    The first stanza hadme hooked, the rest just kept getting better and the last stanza was such a perfect ending.
    As I said before, beeeeautiful!

  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Wow, hun. That was great. It flowed very well & nothing seemed forced. It had a lot of emotion in it, as well.

    Replaying conversations
    That were best left unsaid
    Discovering illicit relations
    Happening in her own bed

    ^ This was my favorite stanza. Absolutely amazing, darlin'.

    Bri [x]

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