Hmmmmmmm...

by Vodka   Mar 21, 2007


If I asked you,
"Can I put my head on your shoulder?"
would you say yes?
If I asked you,
"When I cry, will you wipe away my tears?"
Would I even have to guess?
If I asked you,
"Do you love me?"
Could I expect any less?
If I love you,
will you stay,
and never run away.
With all of my heart,
all of my joy,
all of me?
What would you say?

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Nicely written and very emotional, you expressed feelings greatly, whole poem has some elegance and great atmosphere.
    Well done, 5/5 from me
    I like the flow of the whole piece a lot.

  • 17 years ago

    by x Mo x

    It didn't flow as well as your other. The grammar was a little sloppy too. But overall, good job.

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