Forbidden

by Vodka   Mar 22, 2007


I love him,
but he hates me.
It's just forbidden.
I love him,
but so does she.
It's just forbidden.
I can't seem to see
why he means everything to me.
She loves him,
and he loves her back.
For me,
It's just forbidden.

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  • 17 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Oh my, I can't believe you feel that way over him.
    I like this poem, but not as much as some of your others. It flows pretty well, and overall, good job mate!

  • 17 years ago

    by Silently He walks

    Hmm is this something you experienced? i like this piece over all I just dont like sad endings very much.

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Hey good poem, thanks for the comment, the poem lately was written when i was 14, its about a teacher who was quite bad at school xxxxxxxxxx

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